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A.C. Cargill, All-Human Author's avatar

This didn’t go at all as I expected. Bravo!

J. Michael Thomas's avatar

trying to keep you on your toes!

KHudson's avatar

starting to get really interesting here.

Patrick Abbott, Sci-Fi Author's avatar

“The Paleolithic age to be more precise,” Patrick whispered in reply.

One of my old OIC's if I said that in this situation: The major whispered back, "Shut the ---- up, Abbott. The Paleolithic Age *is* the Old Stone Age. This is why no one likes you!"

J. Michael Thomas's avatar

🤣 but this Major isn’t that smart!

Thomas Salerno's avatar

Very much reminding me of The Day the Earth Stood Still. Great job!

Felisa Ordep - Author's avatar

Been waiting for this!

When’s the next one coming out?

J. Michael Thomas's avatar

If all goes as planned (meaning I don’t change my mind at the last minute with a new idea) the final chapter is this Friday!

A.C. Cargill, All-Human Author's avatar

duh duh duuuhhh! (sound of doom)